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It starts with a statement;
The first bullet shot.
More words fire rapidly;
Each piercing the heart.

The fight rages on;
Until someone retreats.
They run to their shelter;
Tired, broken, and beat.

Though the other feels satisfied;
They know they aren't done.
For in this form of war;
Victory can't be won.
"Who said that only soldiers can fight in wars?"

This is just a poem that I wrote while I was in school.... and, obviously, I wasn't in the best mood. I suppose... you could call this vent.

What do you think this poem is talking about?
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautfiful :iconamericawhyplz:
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A-LonelyDove Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. :iconhappycalinekoplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WELCOME!!!!! XDDDD
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A-LonelyDove Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconexcitedcaliplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MEIN GOTT. :iconwtfamericaplz:
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A-LonelyDove Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
What? :iconderpyshrugplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS SO GOOD. I WISH I HAD YOUR TALENT DUDE.
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A-LonelyDove Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
DUDE, WHAT TALENT? I THINK YOU'RE HALLUCINATING OR SOMETHING.
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haccat Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
this is amazing. the emotion, the symbolism.... it's great.

is it about rumors?
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A-LonelyDove Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
I suppose it could be about rumors. I actually wrote this about arguments, but honestly, this poem can go a lot of ways.
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