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It starts with a statement;
The first bullet shot.
More words fire rapidly;
Each piercing the heart.

The fight rages on;
Until someone retreats.
They run to their shelter;
Tired, broken, and beat.

Though the other feels satisfied;
They know they aren't done.
For in this form of war;
Victory can't be won.
"Who said that only soldiers can fight in wars?"

This is just a poem that I wrote while I was in school.... and, obviously, I wasn't in the best mood. I suppose... you could call this vent.

What do you think this poem is talking about?
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautfiful :iconamericawhyplz:
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. :iconhappycalinekoplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WELCOME!!!!! XDDDD
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconexcitedcaliplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MEIN GOTT. :iconwtfamericaplz:
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
What? :iconderpyshrugplz:
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CV02-Kagamine-Len Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS SO GOOD. I WISH I HAD YOUR TALENT DUDE.
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
DUDE, WHAT TALENT? I THINK YOU'RE HALLUCINATING OR SOMETHING.
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haccat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
this is amazing. the emotion, the symbolism.... it's great.

is it about rumors?
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
I suppose it could be about rumors. I actually wrote this about arguments, but honestly, this poem can go a lot of ways.
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haccat Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
the meaning of art is in the eye of the beholder, and the best kind has many meanings.
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TheDefenseOBJECTS Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
(( This. This is perfect Kady. Is this about you and your...erm..'Ex-Friend'? Well, whatever it is about....you need to know I'm always here for you. Ok? Don't worry about a thing, in the end, everything will turn out fine. Love you, and this and you, are amazing

<3, Katty ))
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It isn't perfect... but thank you. It's actually not about her... but I guess it would fit. And... thank you... I appreciate it.
Love you too. <3
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TheDefenseOBJECTS Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
No problem at all. Text me if you ever need a thing.))
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CanadienLoup Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
This is beautifully said and both strong and deep. Amazing~
I never knew you wrote poetry. I would love to see more from you!
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! I didn't think it was very good.... so I'm glad that someone does.
I'll make sure to post more in the future!
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R-I-I Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
this is the best poem I've ever read.

bravo
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A-LonelyDove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Really?! QuQ
Thank you! Thank you so much!
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R-I-I Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student General Artist
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